Wednesday, January 30, 2013

A to Z Challenge 2013



Oh my! I knew the list was opening today for the annual A to Z Challenge ... so I hopped on over there to sign up for it, and there's already 290 people signed up! WOW!

This is an awesome blog hop that happens during the entire month of April. If you've never done it before, I highly encourage you to participate. It's a great way to meet other bloggers and challenge your blog posting skills.

http://www.a-to-zchallenge.com/

Monday, January 28, 2013

CONFLICT

I'm in the process of revising my WIP, and I thought I'd go back and look at some of my previous blog posts on the topic of revising.

I came across THIS POST about conflict in every chapter, and I considered reposting it because I found it helpful to reread the information. However, after reading the comments again on that post, I decided maybe we should discuss what CONFLICT means, instead.

To say that every chapter, every scene, every page needs to have conflict, does NOT mean it has to have a fight, an argument, a chase scene, or a high level of action. What it means is: there needs to be opposing ideas or emotions in every scene.

Ask yourself the questions from the PREVIOUS POST, but then really think: What is my character feeling at the beginning of this scene? What does she hope to accomplish? What's stopping her? And have your character struggle (internally and/or externally) to overcome those obstacles, and have the scene end with the character feeling the opposite from the beginning of the scene. This creates tension, page turning, and an exciting story.

Does every chapter of your WIP have conflict? Every scene? Every page? Do you think that's too much?

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Positive Affirmation


The time will come
when, with elation,
you will greet yourself arriving
at your own door, in your own mirror,
and each will smile at the other’s welcome.


Derek Walcott

The Nobel laureate was born on this day in 1930.

Friday, January 18, 2013

No Barking!

In 2011, we added a sweet little puppy (named Rascal) to our family. He's the little white dog next to the giant black dog (named Sabbath):
 


Now, almost two years later, he's not as "white" as he once was, but he's a cute little stinker. He's half Beagle, and he puts that nose to the ground whether it's covered in snow or not!

 
 
Our big giant black dog has been very patient. Rascal is the true definition of an "ankle biter." He's is constantly grabbing at Sabbath to get him to play and chase him.
 


And Sabbath does love to give chase. In the picture below, he's launching off his hind legs to run along the fence. He loves barking at the neighbor's dogs (don't worry, we're friendly with them, and have a mutual agreement about barking and when it's acceptable!). If you look closely, Rascal is a little white blur near Sabbath's tail. He always wants to play. And watching these two chase each other around the backyard is quite entertaining.

 
Do you have dogs? Do you wish your neighbors' dogs would stop barking?
 
 

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Writer's Block

Usually the revision process is my favorite part of writing a new story. I simply love taking things apart and putting them back together, in a better, stronger way. However, with my current work-in-progress, I've struggled to get back into the revision mode after completing the first draft of the manuscript.

Yesterday, I came across this great bit that has really helped me. It seems so obvious ... now.

Brandon Mull (New York Times Best-selling author) was asked, "How do you get past writer's block?"

His answer: "Usually it hits because I'm writing a bad scene. I have to go back and find how to make the scene interesting and important. Sometimes I discover that the scene was unnecessary, so I have to kill it and write an alternate scene. Taking some time away from the project sometimes helps, like going on a walk, getting outside."

He also said in another answer, "The other component is daydreaming. ... I partly get to know the characters through prolonged imagining. The better I get to know them through daydreaming, the easier it becomes to stay true to them in what they think, say, and do."

To read the entire interview: CLICK HERE

... so ...

I considered where I was stuck in my revision process. I considered what might be wrong with the scene. What's not working? And then before actually revising anything, I've taken the time to daydream with the character. Imagine more. Worry less. Seems like an obvious step, now, but I was stuck in the mud and had trouble seeing clearly through the mess!

What are you working on right now? Revisions? Drafting? Final edit?


Monday, January 14, 2013

So You Wanna Write a Book

"... begin with the free and unfettered pouring of story from your imagination. ... just let the story flow, without any thought for practical issues. Later on, if there are problems with your story, or imposed practical issues to deal with, use your knowledge of structure to root out those problems or satisfy those practical demands. The value of structural understanding is in story optimisation and problem resolution, not as a creative starting point. Ideally, your ideas will pour out and there will be no problems with the story you have written; in which case who cares what the structure is? Creativity first, always and forever. Structure secondarily, and only as a tool for analysis and repair" (THE STORY BOOK by David Baboulene, p.64) [color and emphasis added]

While I absolutely love this quote, I would say this applies to writers who've written at least one manuscript. I would advise anyone who has NEVER written a story (of any length) to read at least one book or take one class on the craft of writing. And better yet, make that class or book specific to the genre or style you're interested in pursuing.

What do you think?

Were you aware of structure and/or rules of the genre before you started writing?

Friday, January 11, 2013

Book Review: COULD IT BE B12?

Could It Be B12?: An Epidemic of Misdiagnoses


I'm glad I read this, and I read the whole thing. And while I learned a lot from the book, I can't give it more than three stars simply because the writing was so over-the-top fanatical. Surely not every ailment on the face of the earth can be caused by a B12 deficiency ... okay, maybe the authors didn't say that exactly, but close.

I was also surprised to read on page 4, "B12 is produced in the gut of animals, it's also the only vitamin that you can't obtain from plants or sunlight. Plants don't need B12, so they don't produce or store it. To obtain B12 from your diet, you need to eat meat, poultry, fish, eggs, dairy products, or food fortified with B12..."

So, I'm still researching that concept. According to veganforum.com, "Vitamin B12 is found in algae, peas, clover, alfalfa, mustard..." and "Foods fortified with vitamin B12 (as cyanocobalamin) may be a potential problem if cooked."

But Pacholok writes, "...several plants that some supplement manufacturers claim are high in B12, such as spirulina and tempeh, actually contain "pseudo-B12" analogues that block the uptake of the real vitamin, sometimes causing dangerous deficiencies" (page 4).

I also really take issue with any person that places blame (of any sort) with mothers who are well intentioned doing the best they can to care for the well-being of their children. Maybe I misread or misunderstood, but Pacholok writes, "Vegetarian and vegan mothers also are the most likely to breastfeed for long periods of time, which puts nursing children at high risk of B12 deficiency if the mothers don't supplement their diets correctly. Children can be severely crippled by B12 deficiency..." (page 95).

The extremist language used in the book was certainly a turn-off, but I can't deny the potentially useful and life-changing information in this book. If you are suffering from any physical ailment, it might be worth your time to consider whether or not you are deficient in vitamin B12 and give this book a read.

Also, be aware that the authors really beat it into the reader’s head that getting a “typical” blood test for B12 deficiency is not good enough. They go on and on and on about the reasons, but just so you know, if you’re going to be tested, you need the other tests recommended by the authors.

And, if you want to supplement your diet with B12 … I’ve done the research for you (well, I did it for me, but I’ll share the info with you).

A supplement needs to be a SUBLINGUAL B12 tablet that has 1000-2000 mcg of B12 in it and it needs to be made from either hydroxocobalamin  or  methylcobalamin. Many vitamins that are mass produced use the less expensive form of B12 made from cyanocobalamin which uses Cyanide. Why put that in your body?

If you're not getting B12 shots, then you need to take a sublingual B12. A sublingual is placed under your tongue and you let it dissolve there. The blood vessels under your tongue absorb the vitamin directly into your blood stream, so the vitamin doesn’t have to go through your digestive system before “maybe” being absorbed.

Before reading this book, I had been taking oral B12 tablets made from the cyanocobalamin with minimal results. So now I’ve purchased new B12 vitamins – sublingual hydroxocobalamin 2000mcg. And, I’ll let you know if they make a difference for me.

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Resolution Bandwagon

So everyone's posting their New Year's Resolutions ... maybe you want to, maybe you don't ... but if you enjoy reading the FABULOUS ideas of others ... here's one you absolutely MUST read:

EJ Wesley

Thank you EJ for an awesome list! :)

Monday, January 7, 2013

Virtually Connected

I had been walking on my treadmill during the morning news on a regular basis, but since my kids were home for the holidays, I'd gotten out of the habit, overslept, forgotten, etc. Well, this morning I overslept again (I know ... don't weep for me!) and I missed the morning news (because seriously, we only get the local free channels - no cable or satellite stuff for us!). We do have Netflix via the Wii, however, and so I thought I'd find a show to watch on it while I walked. I was in the mood for music of some sort. So I typed "music" into the search box and this is what I found:



It's amazing. Watch the whole thing (it's 14 minutes, but well worth it).

We are all connected ... if we choose to be.

I've made so many wonderful friends through this blog and other writing websites. You're all the best, and I appreciate your voices in my head ... at least I hope those are your voices ... if not ... well, let's just say they are!!!

What music are you listening to right now?

Friday, January 4, 2013

Book Review: DIVERGENT


Divergent (Divergent, #1)



Why did it take me so long to pick up this book and read it? Probably ... because there was SO MUCH "buzz" about the book, I just didn't want to be a "joiner" ... *sigh* ...

Sheesh! This was such a great book to read.

I almost gave it four stars, because I always struggle reading first person present tense narratives, but so many times I got lost in the story and forgot about the writing, I figured it deserved the five stars!

And, I almost gave it four stars because I really had a hard time picturing the setting in the beginning. I'm not familiar with Chicago or elevated trains, and so there wasn't quite enough description for me to polish the picture in my mind ... but again, I kept getting lost in the story and couldn't put the book down ... so, it deserves five stars!

If you don't like excessive violence ... you might not like this book. There is a lot of violence, including kids killing kids. So be warned. I thought the violence in this book made The Hunger Games look like a birthday party.

The plot kept me guessing, and the author took me on an unexpected journey. I really enjoyed it.

I can't wait to get the next book in the series.

What are you reading??

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

IWSG: New Beginnings


The first Wednesday of the month is IWSG! For more information visit: http://alexjcavanaugh.blogspot.com/p/the-insecure-writers-support-group.html


So ... did you make resolutions yesterday? Scroll down to see mine. The first item on the list is "to remain calm and enjoy the beauty of each day."

This may seem obvious to many of you or even unnecessary to list; however, for me, there has been so much chaos in the last six to twelve months of my life, my everyday to-do lists have been ridiculous. I find it highly stressful when there is more to accomplish than 24 hours will allow. As a result, I have added to my everyday to-do list (as the first item) "remain calm." I figure if I can at least accomplish that, the day will be much better.

Also, I've been reading a book about the benefits of vitamin B-12 (review to come soon). I think when we eat right and put the proper nutrients and vitamins into our bodies, we are able to more naturally remain calm, have more energy, and be able to accomplish the necessary things on our to-do list.

And on a spiritual note, I pray each morning that my path will be guided. I know it is impossible to finish everything on my to-do list in one day. So I ask God that He will guide my path to help me accomplish the most important things that day - whatever those things may be - on my list or not.

Whatever might be on your to-do list today, I hope that you find peace, remain calm, and enjoy the beauty of the day.

I look forward to spending 2013 with you!

What's on your list today?


Tuesday, January 1, 2013

Happy New Year!!

I hope you enjoyed your holidays, and I hope you're ready for an amazing 2013!!

This year will hold many wonderful and delightful things for all of us. What do you hope to accomplish? Are you a resolution maker? A goal setter? A dreamer?

My goals?

1. Remain calm and enjoy the beauty of each day
2. Laugh more
3. Live more
4. Write more
5. Love more

That's all. :)

What about you?

Welcome back. I look forward to sharing with you this year.